After my initial testing I sent some screenshots to friends to get some feedback. I got some really good feedback on things to change and things I can add. One of the major things I was going to add in was Post Processing effects, which is one of the points that got raised.
After adding in these effects and making the improvements my worked looked a lot better. However, the sun rays felt too overpowering at this point so I will need to tone them down. I wanted to make the whole office space feel warm in the morning sun but then it all felt a little too orange. Some feedback I got was to try and add some blue tints in to counter the orange which is a great idea.
Before and after shots: